Very pretty but again, proportions are off, you might be relying too much on the clothes to hide their bodies. It's easy to get lost in detail but remember that their body parts have to stay attached to each other. Noticing it way more with Link's legs that seem to be floating from his body. His left foot kinda looks broken but that perspective is difficult to do. I still really like the pic though.
Yeah ... when I read the manga of OoT, I kept thinking, "Oh, my God, are you really in love?!? Am I dreaming??? CHEERS! FINALLY A LINK BETWEEN damn KISS AND ZELDA WHICH IS NOT A FAN ART! ! "And instead, a mere "I love you." SIGH. Oh, well, better than nothing.